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How to Ana lyse a Fictional Text

1. What is a fictional text?

Fictional texts differ from non-fictional ones in that they were not primarily intended to convey information. Novels, short stories, plays, and poems were written for artistic purposes in order to appeal to the interested reader´s imagination.

2. How do you approach a fictional text (order may depend on the individual case)?

a. Read the text carefully at least twice.

b. Write down your first impressions of the text which can be a very general idea, an important phrase, a characteristic feature of style, or the like.

c. Look up unknown vocabulary. Concentrate only on key words that block the understanding of the text.

d. Reread the excerpt and underline important passages, esp. those relevant for the tasks in a test paper.

e. Structure your text according to sense units: How can the text be subdivided?

f. Ask yourself the following questions: What literary genre does the text in question belong to: poetry-drama-fiction?

g. What is the story about? What is its main theme? What is its central idea / meaning / message? Can you state it in one single sentence?

h. What formal elements of the text bring about the central meaning best?

i. Start out with any of the characteristic formal elements which you found relevant for the understanding of the excerpt and ana lyse it.

The main question is: How does the author use this formal element so effectively that it can carry meaning and contribute to the overall effect?

j. Analyse other formal elements of your choice and check whether your findings are true with respect to your initial ideas (points b and g).

k. Perhaps you will have to reformulate your central meaning after the ana lyses of various aspects of the text. If necessary, do so because it will bring you closer to the author´s intention.

l. On your way through the whole process of interpretation, take the following formal elements into account: action / plot; character, setting, atmosphere, point of view, tone, structure, choice of words, imagery and other stylistic devices

Remember that if a story is well-constructed, ana lyses of these elements will ultimately lead you to the core of the text in question because any element contributes a considerable bit to its overall meaning.

3. A few ideas on formal elements and what they stand for

Action: What actually happens in the story? Situation? Developments?

Plot: How is the action in the story organised?

Character: Who is the protagonist? How is he characterised? Other characters?

Setting: What is the place of the action presented? The time? The social circumstances?

Atmosphere: What feelings does the narrative convey to the reader because of the description of setting, the choice of words, and the like?

Point of view: Who tells the story (an observer, the protagonist, …)? From what perspective is the story told (first person narration, third person narration, …)?

Tone: Is the story told in a serious, humorous, ironic, sentimental, or … way?

Structure: Are there different parts in the text? Any subdivisions? How does the action start? What conveys the text coherence? Is there an open ending / surprise ending?

Choice of words: What register does the author employ to tell his story?

Imagery: Does the author decorate his / her writing with comparisons, metaphors, symbols, personifications, …?

4. Additional questions

After a careful ana lysis of the text in question you might want to ask yourself a couple of very personal questions:

• Is the story convincing?

• Can I identify with any of the characters, their motives, their actions?

• Can I understand their reactions?

• Do I like the story or not? Can I give any reasons for my decision?

• Is the material presented realistic or unrealistic?

If you are given tasks in a term paper or a classroom test, make sure that you stick to the rules of good and convincing writing in an essay. Giving proof of your findings is also essential. In preparation you should acquaint yourself with the techniques of quoting correctly from the original text (see “How to quote …”). Keep enjoying reading and writing about your ideas, and your teacher will enjoy reading your paper.

© J. Menrath / 2003 


Useful phrases for ana_ysing texts findest du hier:

- http://loske.org/html/school/english/ana_ysis.pdf

- abiturerfolg.de/howtowriteatextana_ysis_elements.html

Sollte es um eine andere Textart gehen, gib bei Google - how to ana lyse …* ein und folge den Links.

:-) AstridDerPu

PS: Das l in ana_yse wird leider nicht akzeptiert, deshalb der Unterstrich an dieser Stelle

Du wirst doch imstande sein, einen Absatz zu machen! 

Lass eine Zeile aus, wenn du einen neuen Gedanken oder gar ein neues Thema beginnst.

Offensichtlich hast du ja bereits gehört, was eine Analyse beinhalten soll.

Wenn du "Absatz schreiben" in die Browser-Suchzeile eingibst, erscheinen eine Reihe von Texten mit Ratschlägen, z.B. 

http://etools.fernuni.ch/wiss-schreiben/manuscript4/de/html/unit_paragraphs.html

Ich glaube du solltest die Frage besser lesen, bevor du dich beschwerst. Natürlich bin ich im Stande, einen Absatz zu schreiben. Trotzdem hätte ich gerne zur Sicherheit ein Beispiel aus einer englischen Analyse, um nochmal sicher zu gehen.

@vitori

Auch da hilft Gugeln, wenn du etwa "English axxlysis  Beispiel" eingibst, z.B. 

A Search for Equality

Anne Roiphe's "Confessions of a Female (xxx)" first appeared in the magazine New York in 1972. In this essay Roiphe aims to convince her readers that women must put faith in the idea that they are equal to men, not superior. "Women who want equality must be prepared to give it and believe in it . . . ." Personal anecdotes, contrast, and comparison are techniques Roiphe skillfully uses to create a strong, convincing essay.

Roiphe begins her essay with a personal anecdote describing the "horrifying" realization that....